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Post by Game on Jul 13, 2010 22:44:04 GMT -5
Go Time!
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Post by Game on Jul 17, 2010 9:30:18 GMT -5
Crazy Life - Rap Is My Remedy
[/b] I remember kickin it back at the Folk parties Was maybe 12 livin - hangin with the hard G's Sippin on Bacardis - on the mic kickin raw shit I know somebody gettin hurt before tomorrow hit Cos it wasn't long before somebody lost it Pulled a gun and blasted - that bastard Cause a mother to put her son in a casket - Lifes drastic look at what it did to me - Never free - runnin wit the breeze At a young age me and the cops made enemies - and it's for sure they'll never be friends wit me Runnin buck - got stuck wit a thug mentality Inspired by Pac - had me sippin on hennesy - and bringin pains where I focused all my energy but eventually this pain'll get to me all this misery beat me down physically and mentally strange I'm still sane - I guess rappin is my remedy [/center] |
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Post by BuzzKill on Jul 17, 2010 9:39:35 GMT -5
I like this, very nice. The only issue I had with it was the flow was on point and then it'd get thrown off then pick back up again. I dunno if that's how I was readin it or what but it was messin with me.
I'd say a 9/10 for the fact this is real shit.
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Post by KRiSR on Jul 17, 2010 9:40:27 GMT -5
its weird that every verse seems unfinished to because of the shortness .. but i was feeling it man 9/10
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Post by TURTLE on Jul 17, 2010 11:48:57 GMT -5
Yo this was some pretty hot shyt man..
The story was told nicely in a clear perspective and I actually listened to it with a beat. It was like a snippet!
Had good energy and I think most if not all of us can relate to these types of situations I know I have, fuck the pole-ez... Haha!
9/10
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Post by Kral Majales on Jul 17, 2010 13:09:23 GMT -5
I have a feeling everyone's a bit up your arse because you run the site. I thought the verse was moderate, better than your normal stuff, but nothing special by any means.
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Post by Game on Jul 17, 2010 14:19:43 GMT -5
I have a feeling everyone's a bit up your arse because you run the site. I thought the verse was moderate, better than your normal stuff, but nothing special by any means. Hmmmmm. Well that doesn't make it very fair for me does it? So Stuck, if that's the case, what do you suggest I do? .....not participate in any site activity?...... Do me a favor and don't start with that shit. I have been working very long and exhausting hours out of my free time to make this a site where others like yourself and I can have a spot to do what we love. Now if you didn't like my verse and thought that it was simplistic...I can deal with that. But no need to throw up the 'Site Owner' card. Would you like to run the site and I'll just be a member? Because with them allegations, it puts a damper on my motivation for being a site owner. Understand I don't run what these guys think or say. Also they get no benefit for giving me a fake score. I didn't think that I would win this tourney, that's for sure. I believe I already know who is winning this tourney. Also, do you notice that I have posted my verse at the last minute? That is because my mind has been so focused on working on the site that I haven't had any time to really sit down and think of a well thought out verse. I just threw that verse together knowing that it wouldn't be a winner, but at the same time 'not setting a bad example and being DQ'd myself for not having a verse posted at all by the deadline. To all of the members: Please do not be afraid to critique and criticize each others work for what it is. Yes, we are a community persay, but we are also a 'battle site'. Props are DAMN-WELL deserved when necessary, but HONESTY is also imperative when voting. No one will benefit at all by giving me any special votes, in contrary 'it will only make you less of a person in my eyes. No HaterVille doesn't only emphasize 'No Hating', but it also symbolizes 'No Friendly Voting'......they're one of a kind 'speaking in a hypothetical sense. One last thing Stuck: Comments like that does nothing but bring bad blood. You know?.....some monkey see 'monkey do shit........... So just take that type of vibe where it came from and leave the bad attitude on the other side of NHV's front door. Thanks So............ the votes shall go on....lol |
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Post by Shadow on Jul 17, 2010 21:34:36 GMT -5
Yo' I have been so busy running thru other parts of this site and participatin' in the dissin' that I
have neglected 2 cast some vote. So tonight Imma catch up.
(my bad)
I enjoyed this drop 4 a couple of reasons.
1. I could feel the realism of the subject.
2. The remaining lines, starting with 'Runnin buck - got stuck wit a thug mentality' really brought back some memories of my dude Pac.
(I wanna pour out a little liquor right now)
and like TURTLE said, who among us can't relate 2 an incident with the Po Po.
10/10
(R.I.P. 2Pac)
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Post by KRiSR on Jul 17, 2010 22:36:02 GMT -5
I have a feeling everyone's a bit up your arse because you run the site. I thought the verse was moderate, better than your normal stuff, but nothing special by any means. Hmmmmm. Well that doesn't make it very fair for me does it? So Stuck, if that's the case, what do you suggest I do? .....not participate in any site activity?...... Do me a favor and don't start with that shit. I have been working very long and exhausting hours out of my free time to make this a site where others like yourself and I can have a spot to do what we love. Now if you didn't like my verse and thought that it was simplistic...I can deal with that. But no need to throw up the 'Site Owner' card. Would you like to run the site and I'll just be a member? Because with them allegations, it puts a damper on my motivation for being a site owner. Understand I don't run what these guys think or say. Also they get no benefit for giving me a fake score. I didn't think that I would win this tourney, that's for sure. I believe I already know who is winning this tourney. Also, do you notice that I have posted my verse at the last minute? That is because my mind has been so focused on working on the site that I haven't had any time to really sit down and think of a well thought out verse. I just threw that verse together knowing that it wouldn't be a winner, but at the same time 'not setting a bad example and being DQ'd myself for not having a verse posted at all by the deadline. To all of the members: Please do not be afraid to critique and criticize each others work for what it is. Yes, we are a community persay, but we are also a 'battle site'. Props are DAMN-WELL deserved when necessary, but HONESTY is also imperative when voting. No one will benefit at all by giving me any special votes, in contrary 'it will only make you less of a person in my eyes. No HaterVille doesn't only emphasize 'No Hating', but it also symbolizes 'No Friendly Voting'......they're one of a kind 'speaking in a hypothetical sense. One last thing Stuck: Comments like that does nothing but bring bad blood. You know?.....some monkey see 'monkey do shit........... So just take that type of vibe where it came from and leave the bad attitude on the other side of NHV's front door. Thanks So............ the votes shall go on....lol thats it Game.... I gave you a nine coz I was feelin your verse, not for stupid shit like stuck just said.... I dont understand why anyone would suck up ur arse for that anyway.... you are only a site owner, not the fuckin president of the country or anything and like you said,what have you got to offer by anyone suckin up ur ass anyway, theres no advantage.... anyway I reckon if we are setting are good example with NHV, people from other sites will get sick of all their sociopathic bulshit and negativity and come over here where your warmly welcomed with no negativity, hate remarks and sociopaths...... Dont let the cunts demotivate you BG... Keep up the Good Work!!! AweSome site |
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Post by Shadow on Jul 18, 2010 0:26:03 GMT -5
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I'm a newbie here BG, but I wanna just throw this out there if I may,...
I'm a believer that some things happen 4 a reason.
When I peeped your invite on SoundClick, I checked it out immediately, whereas I don't usually follow a lot of links or invites because of the time.
This was an exception.
From day one I had a good feeling about the site that made me wanna come back.
(as U can see I have,...LOL)
U guys seemed cool so I thought hey,
If they running a site with 'NO HATERVILLE as the foundation then
it might be the outlet that I need 2 get back 2 some creative writing again.
So I'm here as long as I have time 2 kick it.
Its actually taken me away from the drama of my regular job and is preparing me 2 back in the lab and get some long overdue work done.
So I'm just saying,...
lets try 2 'all' work together and make this board the success its destined 2 be.
(Hell,.. I ain't never seen another board with its own mag. Thats some cool shit.)
And as 4 the voting thing,...
Site owner or not, I 'personally' gave U what I thought U deserved as well, not because
I was swinging on ya nutsack. That ain't never been my style.
Aight I'm done
Peace Y'all
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Post by KRiSR on Jul 18, 2010 0:31:26 GMT -5
I'm a believer that some things happen 4 a reason.
When I peeped your invite on SoundClick, I checked it out immediately, whereas I don't usually follow a lot of links or invites because of the time.
This was an exception.
From day one I had a good feeling about the site that made me wanna come back.
(as U can see I have,...LOL)
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Post by Kral Majales on Jul 18, 2010 16:28:38 GMT -5
BG, you know from LA that I ain't the type to hate and be a dick for no reason. Perhaps it's cos I like different rap to you, perhaps its because I read books instead of gangsta shit. nonetheless, even with that kept in mind, I just didn't think it was worth the 9's and 10's. Everyones entitled to an opinion right, even if it ain't yours? You do your thing, I do mine, just don't get all martyr about being site ownerwhen it's you that IS STILL bothering Scotty and the rest of LA by making fake accounts. Why?
peace
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Post by Game on Jul 18, 2010 17:25:09 GMT -5
Stuck,
You seem to be wanting to be a problem.
Just stick with LA and forget about NHV.
Thanks.
And by the way,
Nep, Scotty and I have made amends and not that it is any of your business but Nep and I were basically at war with each other and retaliating every time one of us made a move.
His nor my accounts were fake but deliberate and intentionally obvious.
But really, that's none of your business.
Nice knowing ya Stuck, but you just seem to be wanting to cause meaningless problems here.
I should have known that since I seen you call me a bitch on LA.
And yes this is showing a shitty character in you because you're basically intentionally forfeiting from the tourney since you see that your winning the tourney is not likely.
One more thing,
How can you be a member of any site when you can't appreciate EVERY background?
I guess that the only person that deserves props in your eyes is somebody who grew up reading books. (Just because I grew up on Gangsta shit doesn't mean that I didn't also read books..lol}
I'm not going to flame with ya,...shew...there was enough of that on LA.
So take it or leave it homey.
There ain't no room for all of the senseless flaming here.
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Post by J504 on Jul 18, 2010 19:22:16 GMT -5
Good stuff, BG  If I'm being honest though, I really enjoyed your disses in the "Diss the Top 20" much more, I think that is where you really bring the good stuff. |
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Post by Kral Majales on Jul 19, 2010 3:29:19 GMT -5
Don't start calling me flamer. And as much as I try to, its IMPOSSIBLE to fully appreciate every style of rap. I'm pretty damn tolerant, I'll listen to anything, I just have my preferences. And forfeiting from the tourney? Have a laugh mate, I'm voting on every verse as we speak. You should know I don't talk shit for no reason, I said what I thought, I'm done now, its the internet at the end of the day. I'm glad you got your own site together, you come across as much less of a prick on here, maybe the responsibility is making you act the bigger man (which you are) I'll see you in the battle tourney and pray to god I don't KO you for the third time in a row.
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Post by Game on Jul 19, 2010 10:27:39 GMT -5
Lyris is the only one who still needs to vote on this verse
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Post by Game on Jul 20, 2010 11:40:44 GMT -5
Even with a 10 this verse will not beat the top score in tourney now
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